The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates data that passengers using the Paris Metro.
Overall
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, people who use
metro
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the metro
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the
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at the
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peak
hours
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approximate the beginning and the end of the work time
compare
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compared
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other
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to other
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times.
On the contrary
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early morning and evening
hours
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are the time when the
number
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of people is the least. On the one hand, increase the
number
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of users between 06:00 and 07:00 and
this
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point be the maximum at 08:00. After 2
hours
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the
number
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of citizens decrease about 200. During next 2
hours
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it rise to 300. And that indicator remains stable in the afternoon. In the afternoon, there is a decline in the
number
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of citizens using the station to just 80 at 4 pm.
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, the process of the morning is same between 16:00 and 18:00.
Then
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the total of individuals reduce towards evening. In the next
hours
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,
although
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it rises by about 70 people, but
at the end
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it is round of 110.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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