The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summaris the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the town of Denham from 1986 until now.

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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely rural to a mainly urban area. In 1986, the town was a farm area with a large number of farmlands, but now the town has seen a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that all of the farmlands and shops on the west side of the

road

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were removed to make way for new houses.

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, a new

road

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was constructed near the post office which is still there.

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, only two trees on the east side of the

road

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remained. The farmland was cleared and converted into a new

road

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with houses.

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developments were the new construction of a school which is directly opposite the post office and the replacement of the gardens with a large house by a retirement home. New houses were

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constructed on both sides of the

road

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to a retirement home.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summaris the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. why is this happening? do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a chilcd's development as other subjects, so it should be a compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

people believe that poverty is the cause of crime .To what extant do you agree or not .

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.