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Band 4.5

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table gives
a
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the
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 time spent
of
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by
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 British unemployed
pepole
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people
 in their whole daily
routin
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routine
the
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in the
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last
Linking Words
yaer
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year
.
in
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On
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 the side of men of how they
spending
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spend
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 their daily morning
routin
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routine
, we saw that the highest per cent
gonig
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going
 to job hunting (22%)
wich
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which
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 is seems higher than the women that they
also
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 have a (16%). but the
women
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women's
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 side in housework
totally
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is totally
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 unbalanced with men.
the
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they
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 spend most of their morning doing housework (49%)
compare
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compared
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 to
a
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apply
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mens
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men's
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that
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apply
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they
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who
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 just spend (19%) of their morning doing
hosework
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housework
homework
. going to another comparing side. in the afternoon the per cent between them you can say a balanced. Like
visting
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visiting
 friends or
relateves
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relatives
, watching TV, Reading and
visting
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visiting
 town. and some different that you can say
also
Linking Words
dosen't
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doesn't
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 count.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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