The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives

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the

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time spent

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British unemployed

pepole

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people

in their whole daily

routin

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routine

the

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in the

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last

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yaer

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year

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the side of men of how they

spending

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their daily morning

routin

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routine

, we saw that the highest per cent

gonig

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going

to job hunting (22%)

wich

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which

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is seems higher than the women that they

also

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have a (16%). but the

women

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women's

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side in housework

totally

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unbalanced with men.

the

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they

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spend most of their morning doing housework (49%)

compare

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apply

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mens

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that

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they

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just spend (19%) of their morning doing

hosework

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housework

homework

. going to another comparing side. in the afternoon the per cent between them you can say a balanced. Like

visting

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visiting

friends or

relateves

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relatives

, watching TV, Reading and

visting

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visiting

town. and some different that you can say

also

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dosen't

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doesn't

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count.

Mohammed

Jan 22, 2025

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

128 words

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