the maps belwo show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site.

The upper map

ilustrates

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illustrates

the current situation of a zone with factories in

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Norbiton, the second gives information about the changes that will take

palce

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place

in future.

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, what can be seen is that the town is predicted to become more urbanized. Homes and some facilities will be constructed. Looking at the details,

Genrally

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generally

, all the factories will be demolished.

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, on the

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of the town a new school will be constructed. Next to it,

couple

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of houses and a playground will be introduced, which makes it easier for children and their parents to reach these two places.

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, some other houses are predicted to be on the

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side of the square,

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probably

for families without children. These two parts will be divided by a bridge on the north of the main square.On the bottom of the map, it is projected to

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a medical

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and shops, in order to make reaching

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health care and

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shopping more convenient.