The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan
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The diagram demonstrates how a home smokery works. It can be seen that there are mainly three steps involved in the process. The home smokery
machine
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has three parts. The first
part
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is an empty underground section with a lid on top at ground level. Fresh air is allowed to flow into the
machine
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by opening the lid. The fresh air
then
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goes into the second
part
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of the
machine
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which is very similar to the first
part
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. In
this
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part
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, a fire is started by adding logs through the lid on top. Once the fire is burning, the heat from it is coursed through a narrow pipe that leads to a box.
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box is the third
part
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of the
machine
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and is located at ground level. In the
box
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the food items that need to be cooked are placed. The heat coming from the second
part
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of the
machine
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cooks the food items.
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, the diagram depicts that there are three steps in the process of cooking food in a Home Smokery
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