The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan
The diagram demonstrates how a home smokery works. It can be seen that there are mainly three steps involved in the process.
The home smokery
machine
has three parts. The first Use synonyms
part
is an empty underground section with a lid on top at ground level. Fresh air is allowed to flow into the Use synonyms
machine
by opening the lid. The fresh air Use synonyms
then
goes into the second Linking Words
part
of the Use synonyms
machine
which is very similar to the first Use synonyms
part
. In Use synonyms
this
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part
, a fire is started by adding logs through the lid on top. Once the fire is burning, the heat from it is coursed through a narrow pipe that leads to a box. Use synonyms
This
box is the third Linking Words
part
of the Use synonyms
machine
and is located at ground level. In the Use synonyms
box
the food items that need to be cooked are placed. The heat coming from the second Add a comma
box,
part
of the Use synonyms
machine
cooks the food items.
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Overall
, the diagram depicts that there are three steps in the process of cooking food in a Home SmokeryLinking Words
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