The graph illustrates the amount of money spent on book by four countries, over a ten-year period between 1995 and 2005.

The graph illustrates the amount of money spent on book by four countries, over a ten-year period between 1995 and 2005.
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The graph illustrates the amount of money spent on
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by four countries, over a ten-year period between 1995 and 2005.
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, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in book expenses
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all nations. Looking at the details, Austria’s expenditure began at 30 dollars in 1995 and grew steadily over the next two years, at which point it levelled off at just over 40 dollars until 2001.
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the figure increased significantly, finishing at around 72 dollars by the end of the period. France followed a similar pattern, with spending remaining stable at approximately $58 in the first four years before climbing steadily to nearly $71 in 2003 and finishing at $78in 2005. In Germany,
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spending climbed from approximately $80 in 1996 to $90 in 1999, saw a negligible decline to $83 in 2003, rising to a total of around $93 in 2005.
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, Italy showed the lowest levels of expenditure. Spending fluctuated around $ 58 until 2001, after which it rose slightly to $62 in 2005, and
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finished at the lowest point in the graph.

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