The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate information about the purpose why people choose to travel to work by bicycle or by car .

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, the pie charts show that the reason to choose both transports is the speed of them. Society decides to move by bike because of environmental and health reasons

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comfort and distance are the main factors for drivers . The reasons for cycling to

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the same percentage as less pollution exactly 30

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in each section . Because of parking problems for cars, 15% of people prefer riding on a bike . 13% of citizens pick out not paying for oil and another 12 part think that bike faster than driving a car . The reason for driving to work for most citizens is comfort, showing 40 portions less than comfort definitely distance to

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to overcome long distance 21 portions,between home and

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faster and saves time. The

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with big weight things and they have to carry them to work because of that humans give preference for driving to carrying things 14 % ,another 14 % gets a choice for faster than cycling. Only 11% of people think about safety .

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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