The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar illustrates the usage of electricity by various household appliances, commencing within a year.
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, the electric blanket
found
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was found
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to have used
least
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the least
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amount of energy and dollars for a year as compared to a spa which shows a dramatic increase in the quantity of both
electicity
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electricity
and money.
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