The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
The given bar illustrates the usage of electricity by various household appliances, commencing within a year.
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, the electric blanket
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to have used
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the least
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amount of energy and dollars for a year as compared to a spa which shows a dramatic increase in the quantity of both
electicity
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electricity
and money.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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