The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the yearly spending differences by specific English schools in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, spending on teachers’ salaries was in the first place in all 3 different years. Linking Words
However
, there was no significant spending on insurance.
First of all, the percentage of teachers’ salaries remained between 40 per Linking Words
cent
and 50 per Use synonyms
cent
. Which was the most money spent category all different periods. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, spending on other workers’ salaries decreased between 1981 and 2001. By the percentages of 28 to 15 respectively.
Following that, resources like books spent increased in 1991 compared to 1981. But, it declined dramatically when the year 2001 by 11 per Linking Words
cent
. The same happened for furniture and equipment spending, it rose Use synonyms
then
it fell. Linking Words
Lastly
, it can be seen that insurance spending took only a small amount of percentage in all three years 2, 3 and 8 per Linking Words
cent
in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001 respectively.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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