Some people think that the government should subsidize fruit and vegetables to make healthy food more affordable. Others argue that the government should tax unhealthy food instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Gives reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

Consumer

behaviour

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changes over time. Currently,

people

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tend to eat more unhealthy

foods

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which

contains

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contain

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a lot of sugar and processed

foods

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.

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behaviour

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increase

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increases

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the risk of health problems.

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essay will

analysis

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analyse

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some efforts like

subsidize

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subsidising

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healthy

food

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or

tax

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taxing

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unhealthy

food

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. Some

people

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argue that healthy

foods

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are more expensive than junk

foods

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. An effort to make affordable healthy or real

foods

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are

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needed to change the

behaviour

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.

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,

people

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will have

healthier

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a healthier

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life style

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lifestyle

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.

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, if the

government

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give

subsidy

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subsidies

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to healthy

foods

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, the price of fruit,

vegetable

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vegetables

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, and protein

are

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will be

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cheaper. The consumption of those

foods

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will increase.

In

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As

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a result, the prevalence of health

problem

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problems

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related to unhealthy

life style

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lifestyle

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will decrease which will benefit the

government

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in the long run.

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, healthy

food

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subsidy

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subsidies

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will not be effective and efficient if the price of unhealthy

foods

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still

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cheap.

People

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are more likely to still consume junk

foods

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or processed

foods

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because they

are taste

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taste

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better.

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, the

government

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should tax

foods

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and beverages that contain high sugar

level

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levels

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or salt and processed

foods

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.

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, in some developed countries, they already implement high

tax

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taxes

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for packaged drinks.

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policy aims

for reducing

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to reduce

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the consumption of high-sugar

drink

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drinks

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and

reducing

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reduce

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the prevalence of diabetes. In conclusion, both

effort

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efforts

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should be taken by the

government

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to change the

behaviour

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and reduce the risk of health problems in the future. Healthy

foods

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like fruit and vegetables should be more affordable.

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, unhealthy

food

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should be more expensive. With

this

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approach,

people

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will switch to

consume

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consuming

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more healthy

foods

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.