The pie charts below show the frequency of snacking in children while playing electronic games. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the pie charts give information about adult people who used 6 different devices to watch entertainment programmes in Malaysia in 2009 and 2019 .
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the highest proportion of used devices in 2009 was Conventioal TV , Linking Words
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the lowest was Tablet , Linking Words
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, in 2019 Mobile phones were the most devices used by adults but the Linking Words
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one was Conventioal TV .
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the data given , In 2009 the majority of adults used a Conventional TV which had the highest percentage about 34 % but in 2019 dramatically decreased to just 4 % As well laptops the proportion was around 20 % and declined to 12 % in 2019 but the amount in desktop computer dropped slightly from 18 %to 12 % in 2009 to 2019 .
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In contrast
, Tablets had roughly 5% of users in 2009 and in 2019 increased significantly to 19 % , which is similar to Mobile phones in terms of an increase in the number of users
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