The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and give comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the total births and deaths in a European country between 1950 and 2050.
Overall
, the birth Linking Words
rate
had the highest number, but declined throughout the year. Use synonyms
However
, it was replaced by the death Linking Words
rate
. It had the highest figure Use synonyms
at the end
of the period
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To begin
with, the birth Linking Words
rate
had started at approximately 800000 at the beginning of the period. Use synonyms
Then
, Linking Words
this
figure had risen markedly to 1000000 in 1970. Following that, it had a decline moderately to just under 600000 in 1990. After that, soared minimally to about 700000 before maintaining the same level until the end of the year.
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On the other hand
, the death Linking Words
rate
ranked second with approximately 700000 in 1950. Afterwards, it increased to just over 700000 in 1970 and dropped slowly to just under 700000 by 2030. Use synonyms
At the end
of the time, Linking Words
this
number had risen to 800000.Linking Words
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