The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Pie chart)

The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Pie chart)
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The two pie graphs compare the
time
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spent by
grown ups
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on six activities in a nation, in 1958 and 2008.
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,
it is clear that
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there was a rise in the
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allocated to all events except the
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spent with loved ones, and in both years, citizens of
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nation spent most of their
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working. Starting with 1958, working and sleeping had the highest
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allocations with each having around 30%. Following closely were activities that involved family or friends at approximately 20%. Relaxing at home and other events
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as playing sports took around 7% of their
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while
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commuting to work had the lowest
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allocation of just 2%. Turning to 2008, citizens still spent the majority of their
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working and sleeping, recording a high of 42% and 25% respectively. All the other activities
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experienced an increase in
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allocation except the
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spent with family and friends which
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witnessed
a drop to 6%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Proportion
  • Fluctuations
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Time allocation
  • Working adults
  • Activities
  • Comparison
  • Trend
  • Shift
  • Changes
  • Impact
  • Work-life balance
  • Lifestyle
  • Evolution
  • Daily routines
  • Technological changes
  • Social changes
  • Implications
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