The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the year 1995 up to 2005.
The graph illustrates the expenditure on books in four different countries between the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, all four European nations were on an increasing trend, with Germany remaining the top spender throughout the years. Austria used to have the least amount of money spent in 1995, Linking Words
however
, the number started to rise from 2001 onwards.
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had an increase in spending from 80 Linking Words
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. Meanwhile, France, the second highest, Use synonyms
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had a gradual rise from approximately 55 Linking Words
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, Austrian people had the most changes in purchasing books. Linking Words
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they had a slow growth at Linking Words
first,
in 2001, there was a rapid change from 40 Linking Words
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, which exceeded the Italian. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Italy has the slowest growth among these countries, from 50 to 60 Linking Words
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