The chart below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart illustrates the part that students who studied in England who were bilingual and able to talk in other

languages

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besides

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English from 2000 to 2010 .

Overall

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, the segment of no other language was smaller in 2010 which means more

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students were able to talk .

Also

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in 2010 segment of two other

languages

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was twice as large as in 2000.

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, others had Visible Changes too.

On the other hand

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,Spanish learners were the largest segment that somehow dominated the chart in both years and in 2010 had 5% more users than in 2000.But the percentage of

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had no difference after 10 years the number is only 10% respectively. After 10 years another language

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joined University students with 5% bigger than 2000 which was 15%.

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This

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This language

These languages

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languages

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could be anything .The chart

show

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shows

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the special percentage with

also

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5% growth in 2010 which is two individual

languages

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proportion
additional languages
proficiency
decade
trends in language learning
globalization
cultural shifts
inferred
shifted
popularity
decrease/increase in speakers

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