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The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.

The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.
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The given graphs illustrate the proportion of spending money on health &
education
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 in the UAE (% of GDP)
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 1985 and 1993 and the amount of
infant
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Mortality
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 and life expectancy between 1970 and 1992.
Overall
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, there
were
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 an upward trend in
the
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health and
education
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.
In addition
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, the amount of the life expectancy (years) rose steadily,
while
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 there was a downward trend in
the
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infant
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Mortality
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 (per 1000 births). Looking at the graphs in more detail, the proportion of expenditure on
education
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 climbed from 10% to 15% over the period.
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, the percentage of
education
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 decreased to 7% between 1985 and 1990.
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, the percentage of
education
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 increased to 10%. Turning to the line graph, the figures for life expectancy (years) ascended continuously from 60 to 70.
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, the amount of
infant
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Mortality
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 (per 1000 births) fell sharply, hitting a low of 20. To summarize, there
were
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 an increasing trend. But, the most noticeable figure was decreasing
infant
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Mortality
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 (per 1000 births).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, infant, mortality with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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