The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays data about the
children
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's
journey
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to
school
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who
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apply
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aged 11 to 16 in England in a year.
Overall
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, a large number of
children
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walk 0-1
miles
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.
School
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children
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use
car
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the car
a car
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when the
journey
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is 1-2
miles
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. The majority of
school
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kids
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go by
bus
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when the
distance
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is over 5
miles
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. Nearly 90% of
school
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kids
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walk for 0-1
miles
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. When the
journey
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is 1-2
miles
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. Approximately 60% of them walk
while
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only 25% of the
kids
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og
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go
on foot when the
journey
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is 2-5
miles
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. Half of the
children
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's numbers choose to
gog
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go
by
bicycles
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bicycle
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when the
journey
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is only 0-1
miles
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while
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nearly 75% of them use
bicycle
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bicycles
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to go for 1-2
miles
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and nearly 48
children
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go by bicycle when the
distance
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is 2-5
miles
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. Nearly 10% and 20% of
kids
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go by car when the
distance
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is 0-1 and 1-2
miles
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respectively. The same proportion of
kids
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' numbers go by car when the
journey
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's
distance
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is 2-5 and over 5
miles
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at approximately 30%. A tiny fraction of
school
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kids
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use
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bus
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the bus
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when the
journey
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's
distance
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is 0-1
miles
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. Nearly 10% go by
bus
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for 1-2
miles
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. Half
percent
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per cent
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of the
children
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and approximately 70% of them go by
bus
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when the for a 2-5 and over 5
miles
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journey
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respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words children, journey, school, miles, kids, bus, distance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Modes of transportation
  • Percentage
  • Comparative analysis
  • Seasonal variations
  • External factors
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Non-motorized modes
  • Safety
  • Convenience
  • Sustainable
  • Initiatives
  • Promoting
  • Improvements
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