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The pie charts and table present information in percentage of imported seafood to the UK from three nations and total value of seafood.

The pie charts and table present information in percentage of imported seafood to the UK from three nations and total value of seafood.
The first chart shows the percentage of
seafood
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 which was imported to the UK by
Poland
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, Sweden, and
Germany
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 in 1987, 1997, and 2007 ,
while
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 the second chart illustrates the total value
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it
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in the same three years (units are measured in million dollars).
Overall
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, it is obvious that
Poland
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 imported the biggest part of
seafood
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 in 1987, and in 1997 and 2007 it was replaced by Sweden.
Moreover
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, 2007 was the year when these three countries imported the highest total value. As is presented in the pie chart, we can see that
Poland
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 imported 65% in 1987 but the import decreased to 30% after 20 years.
On the other hand
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,
Germany
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 imported 7% at the beginning of the period, but the percentage increased to 27% in 2007.
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, the percentage of imported
sea food
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seafood
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 by
Germany
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 rose from 28% to 43% in 2007, and
Germany
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 replaced
Poland
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 and became the country which imported
seafood
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 the most. With regards to the total value of imported
seafood
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 to the UK, it was $7.40 million in 1987.
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, it went up to more than 12 million dollars
at the end
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 of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words seafood, poland, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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