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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Pie
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graph
 illustrates why farmland becomes less effective.
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 the table indicates how these three states had been
impavted
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impacted
imparted
 by these
cause
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 during the 20th century.
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, it can be observed that over-grazing was the main
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of destroy
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 land. Europe,
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,
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represents
 the highest section and
degraded
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. Regarding
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the the pie chart, 35% of over-grazing was the largest
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ratio
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 compared to other reasons.
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, half of
deforestation
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 causes less
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efficiency
 which was the second biggest part. If compared over-cultivation with other reasons, it can be seen that the proportion of other causes was the lowest almost 28% and 7%, respectively in
1990s
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. looking at the table,
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approximately
 10% and 7% of land degraded by Europe in both deforestation and over-cutivation. The smallest
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in
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over- grazing
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over-grazing
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 was in North America around 1.5 percent in
1990s
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. The
rates
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rate
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 of over-grazing in Oceania was the biggest about 11%.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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