The chart below provides information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including future prediction. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below provides information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including future prediction. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares data about the rate of growth urbanization in the whole world, Africa, Asia, and Latin America from 1950 to 2030.
Overall
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, the percentage of people who
lived
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live
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in cities and will live in urban areas increases and will climb over the period of 8 decades.
According to
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the diagram, Latin America, the main continent that had and will have the most communities in metropolises, hit 41% in the beginning;
then
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it improved significantly to 70% in 2000;
thereafter
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, it will rise slightly to 80% in 2030.
In addition
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, the Whole world's society, the second one, reached 30% in 1950;
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it leapt moderately to 48% in 2000;
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, it will climb marginally to 60% in 2030. The graph demonstrates that African and Asians scored roughly the same proportion at approximately 15% and after that, they went up considerably to a similar fraction at just under 40% in 2000. Later they will grow fractionally to respectively 57% and just over half in 2030.
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