You recently attended a seminar at a local community center and noticed some issues with the facilities. Write a letter to the manager of the community center to express your concerns. In your letter: Describe the issues you observed. Explain how they affected your experience. Suggest what could be done to resolve the problems.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding recent seminars in which I observed many problems in the facilities. I want to express my concern regarding those obstacles.

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, the voice of the speaker was unclear almost all the time because of some technical errors of the mike and many of us were not able to clearly hear the expressed content.

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, many slides of the presentation were blurred so the

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were not able to understand them properly.

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workshop was very crucial for my skill development which could enhance my

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growth at work but these mentioned obstacles gave me a very poor experience. I was not able to gain the maximum level of the content.

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, I would like to give some

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to avoid

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future programs. All machinery should be checked by a professional before the

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. If any issue comes

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should immediately change that system. I hope you will consider these suggestions. Yours faithfully, Priyanka

priyankapanwar251287Sun Jan 26 2025

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complete response

Be more detailed in describing the issues, perhaps by giving specific examples of the technical errors or slides.

single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea with better organization; for example, separate your suggestions into a distinct paragraph.

logical structure

The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is appropriate and polite, suitable for addressing the community center manager.

greeting and closing

The opening and closing of the letter are presented well, with appropriate greetings and sign-off.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

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