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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Malborne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Malborne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
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The given graph illustrates the
amount
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number
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 of participants for various activities at one social centre in Malborne, Australia over a period of 20 years.
Overall
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, the highest figure was observed
the
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in the
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 amount of film
club
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clubs
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. There was an upward trend in four sections, excepting amateur dramatics. Looking at the graph in more detail,
the
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most people participated in
film
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the film
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 club. There was
ups
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an ups
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 and downs trend between 60 and 70. The most noticeable feature was that the number of table tennis increased significantly, reaching 55 over the period.
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, the amount of amateur dramatics fell sharply, hitting a low of 8 since 2005.
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,
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 and downs figure was shown in the figures for martial arts between 30 and 40 over the period. Another unique shape was creating musical performances in 2005.
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, the figures for musical performances rose rapidly to 15. To summarize, many individuals participated in film
club
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while
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 amateur dramatics was less popular compared to other categories.
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, many citizens participated in table tennis since 2010.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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