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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 20072011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 20072011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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 of
households
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 in America by their annual
income
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 in 2007, 2011, and 2015. In 2007, we can see the
number
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 of
households
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 who earned
money
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 less than $25000 was 25
million
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. The
number
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 of
households
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 where people earned
money
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 between $25000 and $49999 was 27
million
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. The
number
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 of
households
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 which earned
money
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 between $50000-$74999 and $75000-$99999 respectively were 21
million
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 and 14
million
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. The
number
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 of
money
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 that people earned
money
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 over $100000 was the largest group , It was 30
million
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. In 2011, The
number
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 of
households
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 with an
income
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 between less than $25000, between $25000-$49999 and over $ 100000 was more than 25
million
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, it was respectively
29million
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29 million
, 30
million
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 and 27
million
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. There were about 21
million
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 and 13
million
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 families with an
income
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 between $50000-$74999 and from $75000-$99999. In 2015, the
number
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 of families with their incomes over $100000 was at the top at 33
million
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. There are about 28
million
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 and 27
million
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 homes with an
income
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 of less
$
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than $
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25000 and from $25000-$49999. There were about 20
million
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 and 15
million
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 houses with an
income
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 between $ 50000 and $ 74999 , between $75000-$99999. In conclusion, the
number
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 of
households
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 with incomes from $75000-$99999 at the bottom at 15
million
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 , and it remained. The
number
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 of families that earned
money
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 over $ 100000 was at the top in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, income, money, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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