The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate the differences

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propose

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purpose

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dock

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the dock

a dock

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from 1980 to

present

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the present

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Overall

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, there were many

ships

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and warehouses in 1980. In

contast

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contrast

, many various buildings have been built over the period,

such

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accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

, a bridge and leisure

centers

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centres

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. Looking at the maps in more detail, the four

ships

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were located in the

center

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of the town.

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, the two warehouses were positioned to the north and a warehouse was placed to the south.

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, a crane was situated to the north and south, respectively. Today, a hotel and a sailing club have been constructed to the south along

river

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the river

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walk.

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, apartments and education

center

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centers

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have been replaced.

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, parking and kid’s playing area have been built. The most noticeable feature is that

ships

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have been replaced

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ship

museum

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museums

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. Another

changes

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change

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are

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that a bridge and a flood barrier have been built on the river. To summarize, individuals have been more comfortable to live in the region. The various convenient buildings have been developed,

while

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ships

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haven’t sailed anymore.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ships with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

176 words

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The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?