The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Umar 2

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The two pie charts illustrate information about the comparison of some types of

energy

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production in

France

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over two years.

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energy

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production percentage decreased only in Petro ,

while

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others went up . The biggest rise had the other .After 10 years Coal is still the biggest

energy

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producer in

France

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In 1995 the highest level of per cent produced was Coal exactly 29.80 % almost the same result

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gas 26.63 % and Petro 29.27 % these 3 types of

energy

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were the biggest in

France

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in 1995 . Above a tenth of the total was represented by Nuclear and other elements together. The production in

France

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in 2005 was noticeably changed ,in total Coal and Gas increased a little bit .

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, the percentage of Petro dramatically declined to 19.55% . Nuclear and other significantly changed , they became 10.10% Nuclear and 9.10 other .

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, the figure of their lines still stayed the same .

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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158 words

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