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The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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transforamtion
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transformation
abouth
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about
 the ship dock in different years of 1980 and present era. In that
peroid
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period
, there was
daramatically
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dramatically
cahanged
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change
.
Initially
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 1980,
this
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was consisted
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consisted
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with
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of
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 several fields.
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ware
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warehouse
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house
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 located in
north
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the north
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while
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 opposite side
also
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 had one
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ware
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warehouse
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house
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. Middle of the
warehose
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warehouse
 situated of ship and carne was kept
to
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apply
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the
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apply
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besides
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beside
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 of
ware
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house
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.
According to
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 the data, in the current
situation
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situation,
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 there were
notably
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 changes increased.
Moreover
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,
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a ware
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ware
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warehouse
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house
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 situated
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in which
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which
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apply
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south
that
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apply
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was converted
to
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into
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 the
apartements
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apartments
apartment
while
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consrusted
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constructed
contrasted
 hotel and sailing club as
new
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a new
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building
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buildings
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. they create the bridge to connect the north and south.
As well as
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,
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a fiood
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fiood
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good
 barrier crate to reduce
fiood
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food
flood
disaster
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disasters
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.
Education
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The education
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center
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centre
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situated
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is situated
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 in the north and
ship
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the ship
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musuem
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museum
 remain between
north
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the north
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 and south buildings. There
are river
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is
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walk
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a walk
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 located in front of
hotel
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the hotel
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 , apartments and parking.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ware, house with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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