You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, • introduce yourself • say why are you interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I trust you are doing well. The purpose of

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letter is to express my interest

to join

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your sports club. Myself Ruchin Patel, and I have recently moved in the neighbourhood of the Bay Area.

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this

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, I am currently working at Apple as a Design Engineer. Ever since I

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relocated to

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new neighbourhood, I have been looking for a sports centre

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suitable to my needs. And, I have got to know that your place

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cutting-edge

equipments

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equipment

, which might be useful to me.

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the

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outdoor activities

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swimming

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the swimming

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pool

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and

bedminton

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badminton

are best suitable

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for

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me as I love to spend some time outside.

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, your website has

comprensive

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comprehensive

information about different memberships,

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I was unable to find an enrolment form for sign-up.

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but not least, please confirm if your facility has a private shower room for members. Thank you for your help. Yours faithfully, Ruchin Patel

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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