The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line presents the global
water
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use by three
diffrent
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different
sectors for the period between 1900 to 2000
while
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,the table shows the
water
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consumption in Brazil and
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the Democractic
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Democractic
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Democratic
Republic of Congo during 2000.
Overall
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, agriculture was the
most
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apply
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sector
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utilized
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that utilized
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water
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while
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,
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apply
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other
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others
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recored
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recorded
record
least numbers.
Furthermore
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,Brazil was the
most
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largest
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consumer of
water
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in 2000 At the onset,
agriculture
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agricultural
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useage
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usage
was less than 1000 in 1900
hoerver
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however
, the number
keep
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keeps
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increased
gradully
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gradually
untill
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until
it dominant with the highest
water
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use
sector
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in 2000 with more than 3000.
On the other hand
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, the industrial and domestics
sectors
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sectors'
sector's
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numbers were similar with 1 Km3 and the
useage
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usage
increased
steadly
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steadily
during the given period until
reach
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reached
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more than 1000 for
industrial
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the industrial
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sector
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and 500 for the domestic
sector
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. To
compaire
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compare
the consumption of
water
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between
two
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the two
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countries
brazil
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Brazil
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was the dominant with almost 176 million in 2000
while
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,
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the Democractic
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Democractic
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Democratic
Republic of Congo
consumes
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consumed
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5.2 million of
water
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annually during 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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