The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays the five countries' film production numbers.
Overall
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, A nation is the highest in the production of
films
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among
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in
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all years. The production of
films
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decreased in
the
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apply
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nation A, but it increased in all other nations. Nearly 90
films
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produced
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were produced
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in 2007 and 2009 in country A. There
is
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was
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a decrease in the number of
movies
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in 2009 at approximately 75.
Movies
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produced in 2007 and 2008 were nearly 50 before they grew to approximately 65 in 2009. Region C
movies
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went up gradually from 5 and 10
films
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in 2007 and 2008 respectively to nearly 20 in 2009. The number of
movies
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produced in D
fluctuate
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fluctuated
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from nearly 20 in 2007 and dropped down to approximately 5 in 2008 before its increase to 20 in 2009. The number of released
movies
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in E nation remained relatively stable with a tiny increase from nearly 5 in 2007 and it grew gradually to 6 in 2008
befor
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before
its slight increase to
nearl
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nearly
7 in 2009.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, movies with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Film production
  • Trends
  • Consistently
  • Significant
  • Comparisons
  • Patterns
  • Increased/Decreased
  • Analyzed
  • Anomalies
  • Industry changes
  • Economic factors
  • Cultural aspects
  • Collectively
  • Overall trend
  • Reported
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