The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates changes in the prices of copper,
nicker
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nickel
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, and zing in 2014 each
month
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.
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, it can be seen from the graph all metals prices fluctuated throughout the given period and all metals
cost
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relatively stayed the same as the first
month
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. Except nickel
price
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droped
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dropped
in December compared to January. Nickel
cost
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fell
down
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in the first 5
months
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from 6% to -3% and from July to September there was a stable
price
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at -1% until a slight decrease in October at -2% two
months
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later the
price
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of
this
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metal climbed back at 1%.
On the other hand
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, copper
price
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started at 2% in January before a slight drop in the following
months
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to June at the lowest
price
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in the year which is above -1%
then
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increased to 1% in July, August, and September, the
last
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month
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the
price
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was around 2%. In January 2014, zinc
price
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was
cost
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1
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by 1
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% before jumping to 3% in February.
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In recent
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months
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there was a steady decrease until June with -1% and fluctuated until October with the same
cost
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of
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as
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June. In November there was a huge increase to just above 1% and in December reached the same
price
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of
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as
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the first
month
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with 2%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words month, cost, price, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "droped" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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