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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the annual amount of produced
milk
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 in
litres
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 in the Netherlands,
Australia
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, Tanzania, and Guatemala in three different years.
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, it is evident that,
excepet
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except
 for
Australia
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, the amount of manufacturing
milk
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 in all given countries increased in 2010. Notably, both
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 had the largest
number
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in
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of
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 producing
milk
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 in all given years. In 1990, the Netherlands had the highest
number
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 in
maufacturing
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manufacturing
milk
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 at around 11,262,000
litres
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;
however
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,
this
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 steadily declined to 11,155,000
litres
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 in 2000, before increasing to 11,466,000
litres
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 in 2010, the highest
number
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 among other countries.
Australia
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 produced 11,246,00
litre
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 of
milk
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 in 1990, the second highest
number
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.
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 figure dropped slightly to 11,105,000
litre
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 in 2000
,
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 and reached 9,165,000
at the end
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 of the period. Tanzania began the period at 87,00
litre
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 of
milk
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 and rose significantly to 1,42,000 in 2000, eventually increasing to 1,55,000
litre
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 in 2010. Guatemala had the lowest amount, which was 26,000,
however
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,
this
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 pattern grew gradually, reaching 84,000 in 2010.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, litres, australia, number, litre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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