Some people think that rest and sleep are the best methods to relax while others think that it can be done by involving in some activities like sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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There is no denying the fact that
people
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have opinion think about
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religion
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it is commonly held belief that resting and sleeping are the best way to relax, there is
also
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an argument that
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involve
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in some physical
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activities
activity
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as sports, is the good path lead to
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essay will analyse
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topic from both
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and express my opinion. On
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hand, sleeping and
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resting
are significant
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lead
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that lead
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to
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relaxation
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, some
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prefer spending their free time after job or school
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the
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bed
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lying
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playing
, sleeping or resting
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due
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to makes them feeling recover after
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day.
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, sleep is essential to maintain mental and physical health.
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,
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study for World Health Care
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the
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of sleep the result shows that
people
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who do not
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8 hours
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to
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replication
diseases,
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as stroke
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and
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alzheimer's
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brain damage. On the
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other
hand, some
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think that the best method to get relax
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is through
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in activities like sports,
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as football, handball and swimming. It is possible to say that when we
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are engaged
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engaged
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in our
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active sport, our brain and bodies
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are involoved
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involoved
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involved
on
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that task
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us
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forget
about our
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difficult
day.
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,
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in public
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activities
like walking
marathon
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will
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improve
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commuincation
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communication
skills.
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,
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Saudi Arabia holds a walking marathon
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every
ever
year to encourage
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to get rid
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energy. In conclusion. There are no easy answers to
this
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question. On balance,
however
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, I tend to
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believe
that
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everyone
should
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explore
his
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path to get
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relaxation
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task achievement
Make sure to have a clear position throughout the essay and sustain it with appropriate arguments. The essay currently presents both sides but lacks a strong personal opinion.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into paragraphs with clear topic sentences and supporting details. This will improve the logical flow and make your argument more persuasive.
language accuracy
Proofread your writing for grammatical errors and correct usage of idiomatic phrases. Focus on verb agreement and spelling for better clarity.
task response
The essay discusses both views as required by the essay prompt.
task achievement
Good effort in providing specific examples, such as the World Health Care study and the Saudi Arabia walking marathon, which help illustrate your points.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present and serve to frame the argument set out in the essay.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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