The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry. Zhazira 2.

The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry. Zhazira 2.
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The diagram provides information on how to fabricate steel roads for the furniture industry.
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, it breaks down the production into several stages, starting from melting raw materials at a specific temperature and ending up with a check inspection of the roads.
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, the raw materials,
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iron ore, yellow ore, and carbon are melted at high temperatures (1300-1500°C) to create molten metal. After that,
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iron is refined and poured into ingots.
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, the metal bar is connected and cooled in a reservoir maintained at a temperature of 60 to 100 degrees. In the next stage, the metal goes through various mechanical and thermal processes;
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, the strand is refrigerated and rolled to produce a specific shape. After that, the product is passed through treatment and heated by a machine, followed by a surface inspection. The final processes are:
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road surface is sized by cutter, ID stamping, and inspection to ensure quality control.

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