The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Summarise and make comapison where relevant.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Summarise and make comapison where relevant.
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The average household expenditures of a country recorded
at
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the
year
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years
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1950 and 2010 are recorded in
this
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chart. The logs on the left were noted in the earlier period,
while
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the data on the right show the state of each
items
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after sixty years.
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, there is a stark difference in priority regarding the budget consumption for housing which decreased from 72.1% to 22.0%.
On the contrary
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, the funds for food increased from 11.2% to 34.0%. On the other side, there are other categories which experienced an increase in terms of expenses.
For instance
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, health care is more looked after in the present day, with the digit
rose
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from 2.4% to 4.5%. Another big leap can
also
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be accounted for transportation, which the number grew from 3.3% to 14%.
Additionally
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, the miscellaneous group is seen to move
upwards
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upward
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in numbers, starting from 4.4% and ending
in
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19.2%.
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, there is an input that faced a downhill over the decades. That exact claim was meant for
the
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education, which lost 0.3 in percentages. Even though the switch was not as vast, it's still worth noting.

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