Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bag thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the debate over how much the government should require for tax payments, to fund public

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as schools, roads and hospitals, is a

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issue. Some people believe that they are a burden and it just discourages

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economic growth,

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others feel that high payments are crucial for maintaining public

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and infrastructure. In my opinion, high taxes allow governments to invest in essential public

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example

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education, transportation and healthcare.

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Furthermore

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all

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services

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improve the

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quality of life.

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, the Nordic countries use public money to provide free hospitalizations, schools and universities, and

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these countries are promoting very high living standards

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to economic stability. Even if in my opinion high taxes are totally necessary, they

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have their minuses, in

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they are a big discouragement for small businesses. To illustrate

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, imagine how can a business grow if the tax requirements are too big and it

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the investors away, resulting in

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losses and economic stagnation.

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, each individual has to suffer, because they limit the spending power and savings, in fact, in countries like France it has

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to protests and dissatisfaction among citizens. In conclusion, I think that a balanced approach to

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problem can be the most effective solution. Governments should provide fair taxation,

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not excessively high to discourage economic activities.

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coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence to guide the reader on what you will discuss.

task achievement

Consider strengthening your argument by discussing potential counterarguments in more depth and refuting them.

coherence cohesion

Additionally, pay attention to the logical sequencing of ideas within paragraphs to ensure smooth transitions.

introduction conclusion present

The essay introduces the topic well and concludes with a clear opinion.

relevant specific examples

Good use of concrete examples, such as the Nordic countries, to support your points.

complete response

The essay remains focused on the task of discussing both views and stating your own opinion.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

233 words

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