The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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citizens

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(between the

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18

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of 18

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and 15)

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to

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diferent

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different

devices they used to watch television

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in 2009 and 2019 . From

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perspective ,

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between the two given

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,

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other devices faced

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in the

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of

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At the onset , in 2009 ,the largest proportion of devices was conventional

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with 34%

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laptop

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second place

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20%

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desktop computer and mobile phone

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with 18% ,

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% respectively .

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, flat-screen

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tv

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TVs

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tablet

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tablets

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came with the least

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2009 with 8% for mobile

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phones

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% for

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tablet

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.

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2019 the picture

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significantly ,the percentage of mobile

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phones

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and

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flat screens

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were close to each other

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almost 27% .Tablet faced a dramatic

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in the number of

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with 19%

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laptop and desktop computer

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with 12% for both of them

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conventional

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number of Canadian

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with only 4%.