You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Akbar Surya Basmallah. I am from Indonesia and now, I and my family stay in your boarding house but there

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several

problem

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that make me feel uncomfortable. I am writing

this

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letter to describe some

issue

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issues

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in your boarding house. There is a perforated sofa

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that

emit

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emits

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foam and it

is make

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makes

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me uncomfortable to sit

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this

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sofa.

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that, the size of

bed

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the bed

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is small and

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room is not sufficient for more than two people, but I booked it for three people. I hope you

could

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take

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responsibility for

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issue. I kindly request

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that you

could

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repair the sofa and please add

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extra bed to my

bed room

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bedroom

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. I

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would be

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very grateful if you answer

this

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letter and

relaizing

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my request. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Akbar Surya Basmallah

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task achievement

Provide more specific details about the furniture issues to strengthen the task achievement.

coherence cohesion

Use connectors to better link paragraphs for improved logical structure and coherence.

coherence cohesion

The structure of the letter is clear with a proper greeting and closing.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for addressing a landlord.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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