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Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

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It is argued that there is a huge amount of wasted food in the entire world daily.
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 is rooted in several reasons, But, there are some measures
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 be taken to tackle
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 a vexingly complicated issue. First of all, It is worth mentioning that
wasting
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 of materials is originated from numerous causes. In
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 regard,
social economic
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 situation and
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cultural
 approaches can be addressed. In terms of financial status, a direct correlation can be established between
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wealth and food disposal. The more
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the country
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 is wealthy, the more people make trash in their meals.
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, the United States produce tons of
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rubbish
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 a jaw-dropping figure compared to African nations.
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, the lack of effective education,
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 a bad culture of consumption, results in the emergence of an inappropriate public consumption manner. Here are some practical
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 for high-ranking officials to address
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 challenging issue.
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, imposing laws on production and the usage of
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 can be beneficial.
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, the government should take more tax from individuals who play a greater role in waste production.
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 to that, many documentaries and
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 programs can be effective
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 and
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 the different classes of society about its disastrous consequences. So, a portion of the taxes taken in the previous
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 is invested in cultural plans. In conclusion, there is a great deal of disposal of
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 globally
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 a daily basis.
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, various reasons cause that
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contagious
 illness, the related organizations should attempt to reduce its amount and consequences by warning and lawmaking.

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