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The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in two European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in two European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates data about weekly working
hours
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 in 2002 in
France
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 and
Denmark
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.
Overall
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,
Denmark
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 employees worked more
hours
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 compared to
France
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. Looking at
France
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's data, less than 10% of people choose to work over 50
hours
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,
while
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 10 % had worked between 1-14,21-30, and 41-45
hours
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 a week.
Also
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, 50 % of workers hit the peak with 31-35
hours
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 per week followed by almost 35% worked between 36-40 in the same period. Moving to
Denmark
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, 70% have worked between 36-40
hours
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 in that particular year making them head from
France
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.
However
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, a small group represented 22% worked between 31 and 35 leaving the rest workers at 10%.indacat that the
Denmark
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 population preferred average working
hours
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, france, denmark with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • significant
  • industrial sector
  • working hours
  • productivity
  • employee well-being
  • policies
  • cultural factors
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