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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011
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The table presents the
number
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 of
people
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 from 5 European nations who
accomidate
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accommodate
 in each other's countries during 2011. From
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overall
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an overall
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 perspective , the British and
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Germany
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Germans
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 country was with the most significant numbers of
people
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 who came from
another areas
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another area
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while
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 Polish and
Italian
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Italians
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consider
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were considered
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 as the
least
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lowest
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 numbers of
citizen
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citizens
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moved
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who moved
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 into the country . At the onset , the total
number
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 of
citizen
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citizens
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 who moved to
another nations
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another nation
other nations
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 was the most
polish
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Polish
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 with 1.168.000 the vast
majorty
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majority
 of them moved to British with 550,000.
While
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 the
Italian
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Italians
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 came in the second position with 863,670
person
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people
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the
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a
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 vast
number
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 of them moved to
Germany
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 556,000 .
However
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 ,
Germany
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 and British were fair close to each
others
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other
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 with the
number
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 of
people
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 living in
other's
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the other's
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country with
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countries
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 539000 ,524,760
respectivly
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respectively
.
On the other hand
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 ,
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the spanish
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spanish
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Spanish
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were with
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had
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 the least
number
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 of
leaved
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left
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people
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 with 202,170 the
majprity
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majority
 of them
was
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were
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 moved to
Germany
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 .

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 5 times.
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