Large companies should pay CEOs and executives higher salaries than other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Keywords: salary; company Type: Agree & Disagree
Nowadays, large companies pay
CEOs
and executives higher salaries than other workers. In my opinion, people in higher positions can make or break the Use synonyms
company
no matter how much they are paid. But in the market the higher the risk, the higher pay demanded. Use synonyms
Therefore
it is very important that Linking Words
CEOs
and executives are paid Use synonyms
according to
their responsibility and Linking Words
company
size.
As a Use synonyms
company
, in Use synonyms
this
competitive time attracting the right talent at a higher Linking Words
position
has become the need of an hour. It's crucial to hire the correct person who can get the job done and compensations are usually deserved for their contribution. Use synonyms
However
, to find and get them on board requires a Linking Words
salary
par from the current market. People in Use synonyms
these
Change the determiner
this position
these positions
position
make critical decisions and their role determines the profits. Use synonyms
Hence
I believe that the Linking Words
salary
drawn by Use synonyms
CEOs
needs to be higher than the worker workers in the Use synonyms
company
.
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In addition
, I Linking Words
also
believe that a fair employee Linking Words
salary
system for all people is critical to the Use synonyms
company
's success. Use synonyms
Therefore
high compensations should be linked to the contributions and performance, not simply to Linking Words
position
. Use synonyms
This
will encourage everyone irrespective of their Linking Words
position
to push harder and achieve Use synonyms
towards
the common goal Change preposition
apply
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that
is Correct pronoun usage
which
company
success. To illustrate Use synonyms
further
, Apple Linking Words
company
CEO Tom Hook is paid 75,000 in shares and 1,00,000 dollars as Use synonyms
salary
for 2024. Use synonyms
This
decision was taken to draw less Linking Words
salary
and be paid in shares has motivated other workers in the Use synonyms
company
.
In conclusion, I would like to say that Use synonyms
CEOs
and executives should be paid higher salaries. Use synonyms
This
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position
holds a great amount of responsibility and to attract the right person in that Use synonyms
position
hike needs to be a bit higher. But at the same time, compensations shall be directly proportionate to their contribution.Use synonyms
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