The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
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The illustration provides data regarding
car
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ownership in Britain. The study covers a
36 year
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36-year
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period, from 1971 to 2007 wherein information is collected every 4
years
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.
Overall
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, the graph
expressed
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shows
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that British people decided to acquire a
car
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over 36
years
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.
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ago.
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It
also
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denoted that Britain’s
car
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consumers preferred owning at least one
car
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. In detail, the figure
initially
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presented a static trend for
one
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one-car
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car
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ownership with figures remaining within 40-50% in a span of 36
years
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and was still predominantly higher compared to others.
On the other hand
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, Britain citizens who had two cars showed a promising elevating trend. Specifically, the percentage remained as is
at
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in
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the initial
years
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of the study and doubled by 1991 before reaching a peak
at
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in
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2007, which was slightly higher than the
car
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-less citizens at nearly 25% and
subsequently
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ranked as a second preference.
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, there was
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a
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consistent behaviour for three or more
car
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owners for almost 8
years
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since the first year of the study,
however
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, it began rising steadily from almost a negligible percentage to reaching a little below 10% more than three decades later.
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, British people with no cars significantly declined in rates.
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, it had a steady plunge from almost 50% which was halved after around 400 months at over 20%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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