The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
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The charts illustrate data about the different types of dance classes and where
it
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occur in a town in Australia.
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, it can be seen from the charts that the majority of classes happened in private studios and school halls. The ballet type usually is below the
age
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of 11 and modern dance is between 11 and 16 years old. Private studios are the most locations used for having dance classes with around a half
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and after that
schools
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school's
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halls with 18
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. and the
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common location is college-based studios with only 10
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. Younger people under
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age
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the age
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of 11 enjoy the most on ballet with around 600 participants compared to the ages
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11 to 16 ages with half number 300 members.
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, tap is relatively close with around 450 under the
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of 11 and around 480 between 11 to 16
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. On the opposite,
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apply
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ballet modern type has around
above
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500 dancers above the
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of 11 and 300 dancers under the
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of 11.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • attendance
  • community centers
  • dance schools
  • private studios
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • ballroom
  • analysis
  • popularity
  • accessibility
  • cost
  • cultural trends
  • media influences
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