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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the future development of an industrial
area
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 in the town called Norbiton. In the future, the current factories will be placed with new housing complexes.
Furthermore
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, the town development will be elevated by having new developments, including a new bridge and ring
road
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. Nowadays, Norbiton land is divided into farmland and industrial
area
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, which is separated by the river on the north, pretty close to the farmland. Meanwhile, the industrial zone is located in the middle to east side of the city. There is a roundabout placed in the heart of the city which divides the
area
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 into two lines, the east
line
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 and the south
line
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. From the east
line
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road
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 to the centre of the round
road
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, there are eight factories lying beside the street. In the near to medium term, the industrial
area
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 will be changed with integrated residential areas that are facilitated with a playground, medical centre and school in the vicinity of the areas.
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, the south
line
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road
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 has been refurbished by adding one additional ring
road
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 that will connect to the main roundabout. To expand the connectivity of the
area
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, the new bridge will be built in the north to ease the accommodation from the farmland to the residential.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road, line with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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