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The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about how many Olympic
medals
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 were won by various nations.
Overall
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, the graph clearly shows that the
number
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 of
medals
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 won by the USA was the highest.
Additionally
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,
Soviet
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the Soviet
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 Union won more than other countries,
whereas
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 Japan received the lowest
number
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 of
medals
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.
According to
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 what is shown, the United States had the major portion of
medals
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, which were 900 gold, 800 silver, or 800 bronze
medals
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. Followed by
Soviet
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the Soviet
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 Union with a significant difference in
medals
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number
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, as it received one thousand
medals
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 in total.
Moreover
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, the countries that won less than 1000
medals
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 were the UK with nearly 700, France, Italy, and Germany won collectively approximately 750
medals
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.
However
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, Japan had the lowest
number
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 of
medals
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 as it won almost 430
medals
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,
while
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 Hungry won nearly 490
medals
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, which was
to
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apply
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somewhat similar to Australia, and Chain and East Germany almost won 450
medals
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduction
  • purpose of the chart
  • distribution
  • total medal counts
  • gold, silver, and bronze medals
  • comparison
  • significant differences
  • ratios
  • regional patterns
  • historical contexts
  • observations
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