THE BAR CHART SHOWS THE SECTOR CONTRIBUTIONS TO INDIA'S GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCT FROM

THE BAR CHART SHOWS THE SECTOR CONTRIBUTIONS TO INDIA'S GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCT FROM
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The bar graph shown illustrates the section benefactions towards
India’s
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total
out[ut
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output
between the periods of 1960 and 2000. There are similar differences between the 3
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but
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some substantial contrasting data as well. Starting in 1960, the largest contributor to
India’s
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GDP was the Farming sector which accounted for around 63% of the total output at the time.
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, as decades passed
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proportion steadily dipped from 63% to around 14%, a massive decrease by more than 50%.
On the other hand
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, the Industry and Services sector started off in 1960 with a similar
percentage
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of approximately 15% respectively.
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, beginning in 1960 and ending in 1980 the Industry market experienced a gradual rise in its
percentage
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from 15% to 25%.
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this
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, its fraction of
India’s
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GDP in % remained constant until the end of the graph’s time period
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2000. Despite starting off at almost the same
percentage
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as the Industry sector, the Services section followed a different trend. Its
percentage
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increased continuously from 1960 to 1980 starting from 16% and stopping at roughly 38%.
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, it rapidly soared between 1980 and 2000 eventually coming to a stop at 63%, making it the highest contributor (in %) of
India’s
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GDP by far. Which was a stark contrast
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1960 when the first sets of data were given.
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, the 3 sectors exhibited a diverse array of trends, each trend contrasting the next.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words india’s, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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