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The table below shows the information about spending on health in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the information about spending on health in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the proportion of
expenditure
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 on
health
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 in Ireland, Italy, Spain,Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that Turkey had a higher share of
expenditure
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health
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 in
food
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,
drink
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tobacco
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 and education than other countries,
while
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 Italy had the biggest percentage in clothing and footwear.
To begin
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 with, Turkey had the highest proportion of
expenditure
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 on
health
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 in education and
food
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,
drink
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 and
tobacco
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 with 4.35% and 32.14%, respectively, in five countries.
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, Sweden had the lowest share of
expenditure
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 on
health
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food
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,
drink
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tobacco
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 and clothing with approximately 16% and 5.40%, respectively. Spain had the largest contribution of
expenditure
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health
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 in clothing with 6.51% .
On the other hand
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, Ireland had a higher in
food
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,
drink
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 and
tobacco
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 than Italy, the former with approximately 29%,
whereas
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 Ireland was less in clothing and education than Italy, the former with 9% and 3.20%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, health, food, drink, tobacco with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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