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The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map displays the development of Chorleywood from 1868 until 1994.
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, there were many aspects growing,
such
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 as transportation and housing
areas
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. In 1868-1883, there was a small area built near the main road, specifically on the east of the road. After that, the railway was built in 1909
along with
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 the construction of Chorleywood station from 1883 until 1922.
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, two large
areas
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 were grown on each
side
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 of the station and the road from 1922 until 1970. The larger development of the village occurred after the motorway project was conducted in 1970. Alongside the motorway
in
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on
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 the north
side
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 and
south
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the south
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side
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was
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were
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 built some house fields.
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, two
areas
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 appeared on the north, and three
areas
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 on the south
side
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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