Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to apply

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for a

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part -time

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part-time

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job in your

football

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club

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.My name is Amandeep

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Kaur

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and I am a

football

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coach at Mencher

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club

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Club

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, in Brampton City. I have read all the requirements of

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job through your advertisement in a newspaper. I have been doing a job since 2018 in the Mencher

club

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This

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club

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has become on second highest ranking for best

football

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training

due to

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my efforts. I have trained so many people in

football

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as well as

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I have 8

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experience

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of experience

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game . I am ideal at passing,shooting and heading. I would like to work part-time as a coach in your

club

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on weekend evenings from 4pm to 10 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Aman

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coherence

Make sure to structure your letter with clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single point to improve coherence.

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Check for minor grammatical and punctuation errors to enhance clarity and professionalism in your writing.

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You effectively introduced yourself and your current role, which establishes credibility.

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You expressed your availability clearly, which is helpful for the manager's scheduling.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

134 words

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Enthusiast
Passionate
Experience
Skills
Qualifications
Asset
Eagerness
Contribute
Start date
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Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you can start

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some believe students should not use smartphones at schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?