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Band 5.5

You will take a short holiday in London next month and would like to spend some time with a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Tell him when you will be in London and why •Ask him for recommendations of what to do there •Suggest some things you can do together You should You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Sam I am writing
this
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 letter to share
an
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some
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 exciting news with you. I was planning to give you a
suprise
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surprise
 but was not able to hold it back. I have taken
vaccations
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vaccinations
 from work and
visiting
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visited
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london
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London
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. I will be arriving on
5th
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the 5th
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 of next month and already booked
airbnb
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Airbnb
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 in advance. I am very excited about
this
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 trip as we
havn'
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haven't
hadn't
t
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 met each other
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 three years and now I can'
t
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 wait to see you.
However
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, I need a
favor
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favour
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 from you as well, you need to recommend
few
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a few
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 places that I can'
t
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 miss during
this
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 trip.
Whereas
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, if you manage to get
few
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a few
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 days off from your busy schedule, I was wondering if we could hang out together and your
new
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apply
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new girlfriend is
also
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welcomed
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welcome
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 to join us. I
had
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have
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 already made plans for both of us
such
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 as visiting
Museum
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the Museum
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 and
Palace
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the Palace
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on
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at
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weekend
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the weekend
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 so you
need
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do need
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 not to
ammed
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amend
 your daily schedule. Send my good wishes to
uncle
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my uncle
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 and aunt and don'
t
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 forget to write me back with
list
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a list
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 of things that we shall be doing together.
Your
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Yours
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 Sincerely Param

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coherence and cohesion
Consider varying your sentence structure to improve fluency and engagement.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread for spelling and grammar errors for a more polished letter.
task achievement
You expressed excitement about the trip and a desire to reconnect, which adds a personal touch to the letter.
task achievement
The letter has a friendly and informal tone, appropriate for writing to a friend.
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